I must admit, I thought you'd go for a more tragic route (Cloud managing to mortally wound Angeal before getting subdued and locked away for killing a comrade). And then Sephiroth would find him when he came back because they share a sekrit connection. :O
But I'd much rather this, because now Angeal can be guilted later. HE BETTER FEEL GUILT. UGH. I can't believe he didn't at least try asking Cloud nicely first and, like, slip something into his food as a back-up...clearly Genesis is the brains of their operation, haha. XD;;
And what the crap, Hollander is retarded, scaring his 'specimen' by spouting off all that medical/scientific testing mumbo-jumbo. Bone marrow sample? *winces* Even I'd be scared of that. Poor, poor Cloud. His needle-phobia is so sad. ;__;
Calling for Zack at the end...*is utterly CRUSHED* Oh CLOUD.
I really liked the introspective at the start, when Cloud considered whether or not his!Zack would like him as he is now. And the progression of friendship, how at first Cloud's kind of like the loser person Zack befriended because he's just a nice guy, then Cloud becomes someone Zack's willing to die for, is so heart-breaking. Somehow there wasn't any opportunity for equal reciprocation in that relationship. I hope Cloud has a chance to make that up now. Zack's BFF-senses should be tingling -- go rescue Cloud! Or maybe Seph's Cloud-senses are going crazy...
Kunsel's such a great character to use to get the story progressing. I like the style, how things happen and then you recap the events either through dialogue or a character's thoughts. Lovely work.
It's kind of amusing how this fic and Hades' Phoenix's Eir's Tomorrow both currently have Cloud at the hands of Hojo. I wonder what'll happen next? :O
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Date: 2010-01-14 09:13 am (UTC)But I'd much rather this, because now Angeal can be guilted later. HE BETTER FEEL GUILT. UGH. I can't believe he didn't at least try asking Cloud nicely first and, like, slip something into his food as a back-up...clearly Genesis is the brains of their operation, haha. XD;;
And what the crap, Hollander is retarded, scaring his 'specimen' by spouting off all that medical/scientific testing mumbo-jumbo. Bone marrow sample? *winces* Even I'd be scared of that. Poor, poor Cloud. His needle-phobia is so sad. ;__;
Calling for Zack at the end...*is utterly CRUSHED* Oh CLOUD.
I really liked the introspective at the start, when Cloud considered whether or not his!Zack would like him as he is now. And the progression of friendship, how at first Cloud's kind of like the
loserperson Zack befriended because he's just a nice guy, then Cloud becomes someone Zack's willing to die for, is so heart-breaking. Somehow there wasn't any opportunity for equal reciprocation in that relationship. I hope Cloud has a chance to make that up now. Zack's BFF-senses should be tingling -- go rescue Cloud! Or maybe Seph's Cloud-senses are going crazy...Kunsel's such a great character to use to get the story progressing. I like the style, how things happen and then you recap the events either through dialogue or a character's thoughts. Lovely work.
It's kind of amusing how this fic and Hades' Phoenix's Eir's Tomorrow both currently have Cloud at the hands of Hojo. I wonder what'll happen next? :O