Aww, Cloud and Kunsel were so warm and peaceful. Only yeah, the line about the helmet hiding his eyes = creepy. I hope it's not foreshadowing.
And then you got Cloud kidnapped and it was such a mood whiplash. Your fight scenes are as good as always; you really made me feel Cloud's confusion and desperation.
And the scene in the lab was a bit heartbreaking. We see Cloud's panic, and it hurts us.
Other Things Of Note: the bit about Seph's and Gen's tactical abilities, the bit about Seph being a genius and Cloud realizing most people don't see that side of him, the line about the pearls, the line about the scars and gloves.
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Date: 2010-01-13 02:21 pm (UTC)And then you got Cloud kidnapped and it was such a mood whiplash. Your fight scenes are as good as always; you really made me feel Cloud's confusion and desperation.
And the scene in the lab was a bit heartbreaking. We see Cloud's panic, and it hurts us.
Other Things Of Note: the bit about Seph's and Gen's tactical abilities, the bit about Seph being a genius and Cloud realizing most people don't see that side of him, the line about the pearls, the line about the scars and gloves.