I hate long, drawn-out stories. And yet you stick around this journal, what? :P But yes, 15 chapters until Sephiroth appears is definitely too long. Hopefully the pace stays satisfactory.
I am now trying to imagine a bald Cloud. IT'S IMPOSSIBLE. He IS the hair.
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Date: 2009-11-09 10:26 am (UTC)I am now trying to imagine a bald Cloud. IT'S IMPOSSIBLE. He IS the hair.