*laughing* Oh my god this is so adorable. Or, more specifically, Ryoma is so adorable. ajshgjadg My favorite part of this chapter has to be when Ryoma's marking Inui's essay. He's just beaten Inui's data again so bluntly and obliviously and Inui's, probably trying to not feel so put out by it. *_* Aah. I can go on about the little things that had me smiling, but what I really adore is your characterization of Ryoma. I don't know why, it's different, but it's still so Echizen to me. I think that's it. There's this layer of impersonality that we usually don't have when it's Tezuka and Ryoma, because Inui doesn't understand Echizem in the same way. *_*
I adore, how Ryoma is so smug, and then, he's a smug little kouhai, and then he's all snarky.
Oh oh! And his disdain for exhibition matches. AWWW. *_* That's going to change, not necessarily in this fic, but it wiiill. ♥
I should probably comment on Inui. Um. AHAHAHA. :Db
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Date: 2009-02-14 09:08 am (UTC)I adore, how Ryoma is so smug, and then, he's a smug little kouhai, and then he's all snarky.
Oh oh! And his disdain for exhibition matches. AWWW. *_*
That's going to change, not necessarily in this fic, but it wiiill.♥I should probably comment on Inui. Um. AHAHAHA. :Db