I don't dislike him on a Momoshiro scale! How can I when he's Zack's mentor? It's just he's such a moralfag character--my friend's words, not mine :D--except when he isn't. It may be because I have yet to see enough of him in the game--I have a really blurry perception of his betrayal, see--but I feel you'll be running him through mountains of guilt enough to make me feel bad for him. :( That and Genesis is gonna be on his hide. :>

You changed my mind about Genesis, though! Isn't that enough? :P I used to :\ at him quite a bit.

LIKE I SAID, I'M A BALL OF FLUFF. :">

It's less predictability than it is an ingrained expectation for doom and gloom. Plot wise I'm chasing my tail, as much as I love timetravel fics, I am an utter failure with creativity regarding them. MAYBE YOU'LL DO THE CRUEL THING AND THROW HIM BACK, FORWARD AND OUT OF EXISTENCE. IDK. This is clearly not the linear type of time travel fic (or IS it), and cloud's such a walking paradox and I keep coming up short for endings. but that's why you're writing it, so I shall patiently wait. *_*

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