You make a charming Genesis and a beloved poem, then you can capture their Characters just so perfectly, with humor.
I have a few problem with the fighting scene, no.. not you fault, but it's because I'm not very good at English to imagine the picture from reading that easily, the last fighting scene with Sephiroth still great anyway.
Your Genesis matches Cloud perfectly, like a best buddy and old married couple, I hope they'll be happy together for everlasting.
You may hate me.. since I love to tease and annoy you, but I love your writing, please keep writing, and you can ignore me if you don't like me..
I hope someone could make this one a podfic, I want to hear the poem read out loud, it must be beautiful.
There is no hate, only joy For you are beloved by the goddess Hero of the dawn, Healer of worlds, I hope to read the next story from you.
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You make a charming Genesis and a beloved poem, then you can capture their Characters just so perfectly, with humor.
I have a few problem with the fighting scene, no.. not you fault, but it's because I'm not very good at English to imagine the picture from reading that easily, the last fighting scene with Sephiroth still great anyway.
Your Genesis matches Cloud perfectly, like a best buddy and old married couple, I hope they'll be happy together for everlasting.
You may hate me.. since I love to tease and annoy you, but I love your writing, please keep writing, and you can ignore me if you don't like me..
I hope someone could make this one a podfic, I want to hear the poem read out loud, it must be beautiful.
There is no hate, only joy
For you are beloved by the goddess
Hero of the dawn, Healer of worlds,
I hope to read the next story from you.